Alfred Hitchcock meticulously planned out every shot in his films long before he set foot on the set. Then he waddled on with precise storyboards, his angles, lenses, lighting directions all completely worked out.
Most artists aren’t so controlled.
Many of us sit down to a blank page with only an inkling of what we will do with it. Then we lay down the first lines, the first words, the first notes and begin to play around. While some novelists plot out their stories on index cards and detailed notes, others enjoy discovering where the plot will twist as much as their readers.
There is a danger inherent in either approach.
For the Planner, there is the danger of staleness, of uninspired, mechanical execution. Hitch found shooting a film to be quite a bore— he was simply executing the comprehensive instructions he had already laid out for himself and his crew. His films, while beautiful and gripping always have a certain cool, artificial quality because of his iron grip, and he rarely got the best performances from his actors.
But for the Free Spirit, there is quite another danger: the descent into mud.
You look out the window to see the sun shining and the road beckoning and stride out, a sandwich in your pocket and a breeze in your hair, off to look for adventure. But, at some point in the journey, a storm may brew. The sky darkens, the horizon disappears behind clouds, the road fills with potholes and puddles and you, still driven and unwitting, plod on. Eventually you collapse — dirty, wet, miserable and lost.
When all of the colors of the spectrum merge, they form clear, pure white light. But when you combine all the colors in your paint box, you always get that same khaki brown.
Sometimes, particularly when I am painting, I will get a picture to a certain point and then, unhappy with the way it looks, I’ll go too far. I’ll deepen the shadows, I’ll strengthen the outlines, and then when I’m very desperate, I’ll introduce some garishly bright color to distract the eye, vermillion skies, chartreuse skin. It never works.
Painfully, it’s when I am doing a commission or making a present for someone that I am most likely to encounter this problem. Some part of my brain will not let go and sits in the background, whining and harping and firing suggestions. Instead of letting the piece takes its natural course, I try to twist it in a direction it doesn’t want to go and the results is mud.
I’ve seen this phenomenon in my career in advertising so many times. Because the process requires the approval and opinions of many people and compromise is often the watchword of the day, we slop a lot of mud. How often I’ve been working with a composer on the score of a TV spot only to have a client wade in with ‘issues’ and suggestions. Soon new layers of drums and strings and effects are thrown over the music until it is muffled under a blanket. The same happens with writing, as adjectives and claims get inserted at the last minute like tumors metastasizing on paragraphs that had been edited and polished until they were organic and easy on the ear. So often the reason is stated: ”Sure,
you understand it the way you’ve written it, we understand it, but will the consumer understand it? Let’s emphasize the main points more strongly. "And so additional legs and wings and humps are sewn on to the monster, not because anyone’s gut instinct requires them but because of second guessing and lack of vision.
When Jack was in preschool, there was one teacher whose class always did the most amazing paintings. Each one was clear and sharp and intelligent, Picassos in a sea of muddy fingerpaints. I asked her what she taught her kids, what she said to keep their visions so pure. She replied, “I don’t tell them anything, really. I just know when to take their paper away.”
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amen =)
Posted by: David | February 11, 2004 09:18 AM
Great blog entry. I couldn't agree more. I place a link to this entry in my own blog at http://ronhuxley.blogs.com/privatepracticebuilding/2004/02/everyday_matter.html
Posted by: Ron Huxley | February 11, 2004 09:44 AM
What a wonderful post on the creative process, and one that's very relative to my own current task of revision. As a picture framer, I must often do the same to my clients as that very clever teacher has done--tear it out of their hands and send them out of my shop before it's overdrawn, since they are well aware I have various art supplies available to use and always seem to see something they MUST fix as I shove them out the door!
Posted by: susan | February 11, 2004 10:34 AM
I heard it once said...you need two people in order to paint...one to do the painting...the other to tell the painter when to stop!! I know your cunundrum (sp?) well.....keep on fixing, tweaking....until it REALLY is MUD!! Patience sometimes is not the mindset of an artist...sometimes more than others, we plunge ahead...with our hearts and our brushes or colors...and end up with mud!!
Experience!! Patience!! Forgiveness!! All in an artist's pallette as much as his/her paints.
Thanks for your message!
Posted by: Nancy | February 11, 2004 11:39 AM
When I worked with junior copywriters, I'd always tell them to go back and cut out a half to a third of the words, then bring the copy back and show me again. Eventually they learned *not* to include the mud in the first place. If only it were that easy with clients who never seem to understand less is more.
Posted by: Karen Winters | February 11, 2004 12:55 PM
like my friend Rita says, reading your words is like an encouraging pat on the back...confirming what I already knew,...just more so....thank you, Mr Gregory!
Posted by: fern | February 11, 2004 03:38 PM
Danny,
Once again nice writing, keen insight, appropriate topic.
Posted by: Doug | February 11, 2004 03:46 PM
Thanks for this topic Danny. I am feeling a bit mired in the mud here in the office and you remind me that we all can let our insecurities cause second-guessing. In the end, the design is not finished and the design budget is all gone...Oops. But let's see one more version of that trellis, could we?
Posted by: Patrick | February 11, 2004 04:16 PM
Color is one of my exciting engagements! I think being from a textile design background helps, because designs are created as though they are paint by numbers. You paint between the lines with halftones and quarter tones. I approach color in this same way, I create palettes and add on when needed.
The design process is a growing thing. I design as I go and find much wonder in it. The main task is knowing when to start a second piece and when to go back to the first, just like your son's teacher! That part of your post really resonated with me.
Thank you!
Posted by: melly | February 11, 2004 09:15 PM
Thanks for this essay!
Oh, I've known the pitfalls of mud all too often!
As I am beginning to create again, I have this as one of my goals: not to kill my artwork!
To step back much more frequently as I'm in the process.
Also to walk away for several hours (or an entire day, if need be) ..To come back with a fresh eye, and remind myself that I must let go at some point.
To let the next one be a chance to do "better" (or not), rather than have this one be "perfect".
Posted by: Amy | February 12, 2004 12:27 AM
Just dont' forget that the finest porcelain began as - mud!
Posted by: Loretta | February 12, 2004 07:39 AM
thanks so much for this post
this was always my problem in school art classes. I'd get to a place where I was happy with the work, "finished". But there was always more weeks left in the term, and the teacher would say "it mustn't be finished" ... "there's always more you can do". No good... Always went downhill. And I thought I was no good at art...
Posted by: peter | February 13, 2004 07:18 PM